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Thank you, Families!


 


 



We Are Thankful for Our Families!


Below are our first attempts at writing five paragraph essays.
 

 

My Family Is The Best Family In The World!

Alexis

My family is the best family in the world. I am thankful for my awesome mom, great dad, and silly brother.

My mom is awesome because she takes care of me and my brother. She keeps everyone in my family safe.

My dad is great because he works to make money for our family. He works till 9:00 at night.

My brother is silly because sometimes he pretends that he is presided. I’ve my brother! And now you can see why my family is the best in the world!

I Love My Family.

My Great Family

Harrison

My family is great. I am thankful for my family because of my funny dad, super mom, and fun pets.

My dad tells really funny jokes. He teaches me jokes to tell to people.

My mom is super. My mom helps me feel when I’m sick. She helps me with my homework when I’m stuck. My mom makes me cookies for me.

My pets are fun. My pets are fun because they play with me. They walk with me. We wrestle together.

Now that you see my funny dad, super mom, and fun pets you must agree I have a good family.

My Family

Kenny

My family is super duper. I am thankful for my family because of my sweet mom, funny dad and my nice grandma.

My mom is very sweet because she would kiss me on the finger when I got hurt.

My grandma is very nice because once I was sick and mom had to work so she couldn’t stay with me so my grandma did and that’s why my grandma is very nice.

My dad is very funny because he tells jokes like where can an 800 pound gorilla sleep? Where ever he wants.

My family is the best in the world.

My Family Is Cool

By John

My family is cool. I’m thankful for my family because of my fabulous dad, my helpful mom, and my older cousins.

My fabulous dad plays baseball with me. My dad helps me to get better and better at baseball. It was fun.

My helpful mom does everything for me. My mom is helpful because she puts Band-Aids on me when I have a cut..

My older cousins protect me When I am not looking they tell me to get out of the way of a car. They protect me from gangsters

As you can see my family is very helpful.

My Family

Briauna

My family is awesome. I am thankful for my family because of my cute pets, awesome Dad, and my excellent mom.

My pets are so cute. My cat is so cute when she sleeps on her back, and when my bunny jumps in her cage. My cats name is Slipper and my bunnies name is Fluffy.

My dad is awesome. My dad once built me a big fort outside. For my fourth birthday he built me a kitchen set for me.

My mom is spectacular when she lets me cook with her. I always love when she braids my hair after I get out of the shower so it’s curly in the morning.

Now you can see my family is the best.

My Family Is the Best

Hannah

My family is the best ever. I am thankful for my family because of my helpful Mom, hard working Dad, and playful brother.

One day my mom helped me clean my room. Then one other day, when I was at school, my mom went to a store and got me a Webkinz

My dad works a lot because when I broke my bike one day he fixed it for me. Then, the next day, he helped me clean my dike.

My brother is so playful because we play a lot of games like tag. When my brother pushes me on the ground he says I am sorry.

Now can you see that my family is the best ever!

My Family

by Ryan

My family is the best family ever! I'm thankful for my funny dad, fun sister, and nice brothers.

I'm thankful for my dad because whenever I want to play catch he says, "Sure." He is also my baseball coach. I really love him!

My sister is really good at Dogopoly. Once she won 12 times in a row. My sister is fun to play with.

My brothers are crazy. One is 11 and the other is 12. They like a lot of different stuff. One likes hockey and the other doesn't. I love my brothers!

My Family Is the Best

by Justin

I have the best family in the world. I'm thankful for my family because of my playful sister, my strong dad, my supermom, and my grandmother.

My sister is really playful. My sister is playful when I come home. She likes to play ball.

My dad is strong because he helps me live things I can't lift.

My mom is super. She helps the with my homework. She makes dinner for me sometimes because she works the night shift. I love my mom.

My grandmother is awesome because she makes awesome Mac and cheese. She helps me with my homework, also.

Now you know why my family is the best!

My Great Family

by Elijah

My family is great. I'm thankful for my family because of my great mom, my awesome pet, and my super dad.

My mom is great. My mom buys me a lot of great toys. My mom shoots my BB gun with me.

My pets are awesome because they are cuddly and furry. I have a pet hamster and pet fish.

My dad is super because he takes me to my friend's house.

Now you can see my family is great.

My Family

by Claire

I have the best family on the block. I'm thankful for my family because of my awesome dad, my caring mom, and my sisters who play with me.

My dad is awesome because he helps me do my homework. He also makes me my dinner.

My mom is so caring. My mom is so caring because when I get hurt she kisses my cut. She is my buddy.

My sisters are so playful because whenever I am bored my sisters come along and play with me. We love to play hide and go seek.

My Family

by Cody

My family is the most fun ever. I'm thankful for my family because of my funny dad, my loving mom, and my two funny brothers.

My dad is really funny. He has the best jokes in the world. I just can't stop laughing at his jokes. He teaches me a lot of jokes.

My mom is so loving. She calls the doctor right away when I am sick and tries to get the earliest appointments. She makes all my party plans for me all the time.

My brother John is a lot of fun. So is my brother Mikey. They play with me every day. They play baseball, football, and soccer with me.

And now you can see why my family is so fun.

My Family

by Tyler

My family is great. I'm thankful for my family because of my nice mom, my pets, and my cool dad.

My mom is nice. She lets me go to birthday parties and makes breakfast.

My dad plays baseball with me. He makes me breakfast, too.

My pets are cute and nice. I have two cats. They play with toys and they sleep with me in my bed.

Now you see why my family is great.

My Family

by Lindsay

My family is the best. I'm thankful for my family because of my superb mom, spectacular dad, and amazing brother.

My mom is superb. I remember when she told me how I got my name. She said, "Are you a Lindsay or a Sheila?" She kisses me after dad leaves my room. Mom is the best mom.

My dad is spectacular. He reads me stories that night. He lets me hear extra stories. He is the best dad.

My brother is amazing. He picks me up and makes me laugh. He chases me.

Now you can see my family is the best!

My Great Family

by Nico

My family is super duper. I'm thankful for my family because of my great mom, my excellent dad, and my super sister.

My mom is great because when I'm sick she makes me toast and scrambled eggs. When I wait for the bus my mom plays hockey with me.

My dad is excellent because every weekend he plays hockey with me. He drives me to hockey, too.

I'm thankful for my super sister. When I'm sick before school my sister says, "Bye". And sometimes she reads to me at night.

Now you can see that my family is awesome.

My Wonderful Family

By Lydia

My family is the best. I am thankful my family because of my wonderful mom, super dad, and my awesome brother and sister.

My mom is wonderful because she helps me with my homework when I need help. She cooks me lunch and dinner. My mom drives me where I need to go. I love my mom.

My dad is super because he fixes my toys and anything else. He lets me go to work with him. My dad is the best.

My brother and sister are the best. My brother is awesome because he plays games with me and when I get hurt he gets me an ice pack. My sister is the best because she likes to play dance with me and she’s really funny. I love my brother and sister

Now you can see why my family’s the best.

My Awesome Family

by Jennie

I love my family and I am grateful because of my playful mom, my excellent dad, and my powerful brother named Harry.

My mom is playful because she used to play tag.

My dad is excellent because he writes bikes with me, throws frisbees, and we play in the yard.

My brother is powerful because he rough houses and gets me to fall over. Sometimes we dance.

As you can see, I have an awesome family because of my playful mom, my excellent dad, and my powerful brother.

My Awesome Family

Joseph

My family is awesome. I am thankful for my family because of my nice mom, my smart dad, and my funny pet.

My mom is very nice. I remember the times when she reads me a story when I am sick. And she will never forget to come up at bedtime and give me a hug and a kiss.

My dad is really smart. He teaches me the grass whistle and the train whistle. He also taught me how to whistle.

My dog is really funny. She has a small tire and when she picks it up it goes over her snout it looks like it hanging there! She puts her snout in a box and it gets stuck there. So she is running in circles trying to get the box off.

As you can see, because of my nice mom, smart dad, and funny pet I’ve got the best family in the world.

 

The music is

"Someone to Watch Over Me"
from
http://www.harrythecat.com/newmusic/

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Angel 9oh7

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