AP English Language & Composition Test Preparation Guide
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Students: Please explore the links and files at the bottom of the page. The file "AP Test Prep" contains my strategy suggestions heading into the exam.
IMPORTANT: On the left margin, explore the links under "Literary Tools." Three sublinks will show: Literary Terms, Sentence Structure, and Punctuation. There will also be sublinks under these headings. Most, if not all, of the terms listed below appear within those pages. Any of the terms given could appear on the AP English Language exam. The list given below is a recommended study sheet provided by the CollegeBoard but is not necessarily inclusive.
And Down the Stretch They Come!
AP English Language Test, Wednesday, May 11.
(Please see Mr. W's Crib Sheet Just Below with Final Preparation Suggestions)
Please congregate in the Panther Den no later than 7:30 A.M. Testing will begin promptly at 8 A.M.
To bring:
Picture ID
Premium, high quality eraser
Time-keeping device
Well-sharpened pencils (perhaps 4-5)
Kleenex
Multiple layers (the room can range from hot to cold; you can always take a layer off)
Beginning at 7:15: Your current and former English teachers will have specially prepared smoothies and high-energy snacks to give you that little extra edge. The nutrients that you put into your body WILL affect your performance. Eat a well-balanced breakfast that morning!
AP Test Preparation: Crib Sheet
Expect to write three distinct essays: Synthesis, Rhetorical Analysis, and Persuasive Argument.
Do understand that the test-writers are not obligated to have one of each; however, for the past five years—on both the A and B exams—they have.
You will have 2:15 to complete the writing section. The time begins with a 15-minute reading and planning period for the synthesis prompt. Then, you will have two hours to write three essays. Budget 40 minutes per essay. Do NOT exceed that time. Each essay counts equally. To short-change yourself on one essay invites disastrous scoring consequences.
To Do:
Read Mr. Wevodau’s webpage “Writing for the AP Exam.” Read the advice on the three subpages (one for each of the three essay types).
Read the sample files, “Writing the AP Introduction,” “Writing the AP Conclusion,” “Writing Body Paragraphs for the AP Synthesis and Persuasive Argument Essays,” and “Writing Body Paragraphs for the Rhetorical Analysis.” These files contain writing advice and samples from published essays scoring 8 or 9.
On Mr. Wevodau’s webpage, “Advanced Placement Essay Reviews,” click on the subpage “Released AP Test Materials.” This page contains all prompts and sample essay files since 1999. Many have been reviewed in class. Some have not. Focus on the 2007 or more recent exams. Your test will look similar to these.
For the Multiple Choice Section: Know the 100 terms in the AP English Language terms study set. Studying your vocabulary and word parts sets has value. On the test, use word deconstruction strategies (look for familiar elements to predict meaning). You have 60 minutes. Monitor the time closely. Answer each question. Remember: The easiest reading passage and the easiest questions just may be the last ones.
Quick Notes:
Persuasive Argument Prompt.
Begin with an engaging opening paragraph. Recommended: Start with an anecdote that works persuasive. The anecdote should lead directly to the issue and your specific thesis.
Each body paragraph should have a specific, illustrative example. Use history, current events, or personal experience. The more detailed the better.
HOW? WHY? These are the key questions. HOW does your specific, illustrative example prove/support your thesis? WHY should your audience think as you do on this issue? If you have 3-4 sentences per body paragraph that do just this, then you should expect a high score.
End your paper with a final, persuasive appeal. Do NOT summarize. Try to win the argument with your last paragraph.
Remember: Your audience is people who either disagree with you or have not yet made up their minds. Write in a manner to persuade this audience to your way of thinking. Reach out to them and fully explain WHY they should think as you do.
Address the Opposition: Related to the last point: You can’t persuade someone who disagrees with you if you don’t address their thinking. Explain why they are incorrect. Or, if they have a good point, explain why your position is still the best choice.
Be sure that you have a clear position. This is an argument FOR one position. Don’t try to play both sides. That’s not persuasion.
Synthesis Prompt
The synthesis prompt is argumentative. All advice for the Persuasive Argument prompt applies here.
Write one body paragraph in which you synthesis three sources in support of one of your points. The graders are evaluating your ability to merge outside facts/sources with your own. Show off!
Be sure to cite all facts, etc., taken from the sources. Consider this a research paper. Failure to cite sources can lead to a failing score, as you would be plagiarizing.
Use at least four sources. Five or more is recommended. The more, the better.
As you read over the documents, be sure to underline, circle, etc., all potential evidence/facts/quotes that you might use. On exam materials, create a simple chart (t-chart, etc.) to compile ideas on which to write. After each idea, put the document source (A, B, etc.). At the end of the reading, you want to quickly and easily see all possible ideas on which to write and which sources contain that information.
Recent prompts have used phrasing like, “Take a position…on what the most important considerations should be…..” Keep in mind that BOTH the considerations and the order in which they appear may differ from others. What should the most important consideration be? Be prepared to argue WHY.
Rhetorical Analysis
Your introduction should clearly establish the issue, the writer’s rhetorical purpose, and specifically reference the primary rhetorical strategy. (But avoid a “laundry list” of tactics. Don’t say, “The writer uses emotional appeal, metaphors, and an analogy.” Say, “The writer attempts to make his audience feel guilty by comparing their behavior to…..”)
Your body paragraphs do three essential things: (1.) Identify a rhetorical choice. (2.) Present specific evidence—with direct quotes being preferable.) And (3.) Explain WHY the writer made this choice and HOW this choice affects/shapes the way the audience thinks or feels. The more time spent on (3.), the higher your score will be.
Consider the order of ideas/choices in your analysis: Most arguments build, such that the ending naturally follows a series of steps. Address these steps (or stages) in order as you write. (For example: In America Needs Its Nerds, Leonid Fridman first established that America has an anti-intellectual culture; then he established that our international rivals have a pro-intellectual culture; and then he ends by suggesting that America’s future is endangered unless we changed our habits. –In this example it would be silly to begin your analysis by talking about strategies used at the end first. Follow the argument! Show your understanding as to how the writer develops the argument through his or her choices.)
End your paper by analyzing the writer’s concluding strategy or choices. Do NOT end with a dull sentence like, “In conclusion, the author used the above-described strategies to convince his audience that ________.”
Worth repeating: Talk about the intended effect on the audience. WHY did the writer make this choice? HOW does this choice affect/shape the way that the audience thinks?
Do NOT give your opinion in this essay unless asked. In rare cased, students have been asked to first analyze and then evaluate an argument. Be sure to do exactly what you are asked to do.
What are "rhetorical strategies"?
Consider the following: 1. Figurative language (e.g., metaphors, similes) 2. Analogies (or comparisons in general) 3. Emotional Appeals (how does the writer target the audience's emotions?) 4. Logical Appeals (how does the writer target the audience's intelligence?) 5. Attempts to establish credibility 6. Use of repetition (if they repeat it often enough, people tend to believe it) 7. Diction (note patterns of words) 8. Standout sentences (that is, sentences designed to grab your attention) 9. Tone (consider how effective sarcasm can be) 10. Cause-effect argumentation (if this happens, then....) 11. Addressing the opposition 12. Use of historical precedents (this falls under analogies but is worth noting separately) 13. Contrast (sometimes a writer best shows his position by contrasting it to another, weaker view) 14. Selection of Detail (remember, the person making the argument chooses what you see and don't see)
Remember the Keys to AP Writing!
Rhetorical Analyses:
Subject Occasion Audience Purpose You can do it!
Specific Examples How does the writer's choice affect the reader/listener? Rhetorical modes: Ethos, Pathos, Logos Explain the writer's intent Why does the writer think the reader/listener's opinion will be changed?
For Persuasive Arguments:
Specific thesis/specific examples Hook the reader Address the opposition Don't fence sit! Explain how and/or why your examples prove your thesis Show attitude!
IMPORTANT:
For those who tend to score 4's and 5's on their essays, perhaps the key to last minute improvement is commentary. In commentary, the writer explains HOW or WHY the given evidence supports or proves his or her point. Commentary explains WHY the analyzed writer chose to use certain rhetorical strategies.
Simply having extended commentary improves most papers. The absence or limitedness of commentary results in low scores, as the writer never bothers to explain his or her thinking.
To better your commentary, consider using the following phrases after your examples:
From this example, one can..... This shows that.... By this, the author..... The intended effect of this..... The reader (or audience) would.....
Whatever follows such phrases is analysis that explains HOW or WHY the state evidence proves the author's point, or supports the writer's ideas.
Papers scoring a 4 or less do not show adequate understanding. In other words, the commentary in 4's (or less) is nonexistant, not fully explained, or flat out wrong.
Key Terms:
The following essential terms have been taken from an Official AP Prep guide. The test writers expect you to know them. Use the links in the Literary Terms Section of this website to compile definitions.
Advice from the Chief AP Reader
(DOC 34 KB)
More advice, this time from the person who oversees the writing and scoring of the exam.
Official AP English Course Description
(PDF 1.24 MB)
This file, written by the CollegeBoard, details the AP English course programs and include practice materials, answer keys, and model essays.
AP Rhetoric
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This document details what students should know about rhetoric heading into the AP English Language exam.
1989 MLK AP Essay Analysis
(DOC 40 KB)
This file uses student models--both good and bad--for introductions and conclusions.
AP Language Prep Sheet
(DOC 48 KB)
This file, created by Mr. Wevodau, presents a synopsis of the basic strategies and approaches to different parts of the test.
AP Test Strategies
(DOC 46 KB)
This file, created by Mr. Wevodau, may repeat some of the information in the above AP prep file. It contains advice for both the multiple choice and essay sections.
AP Synthesis Question Advice
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This short file, created by Mr. Wevodau, suggests procedures for tackling the synthesis question.
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