I have posted my "work in progress" on the Writer's Workshop page. Since I've been sharing my ideas and feed back about your writing with you all year now it's your turn.
Please post comments or messages that might help me write this. Keep in mind the peer conference rules and the goals of positive and constructive feedback.
Kyle has a new request. Please read them and respond on the blog.
I need my intro paragraph to talk about how parents are to blame for immature kids playing violent videogames. I don’t want the paragraph to talk about it directly, but to talk about how I am going to talk about parents buying violent games for their immature kids.
You hear it on the news, you see it on the internet, and you read it in the newspaper; young kids and teenagers murdering innocent people. These killings are not a joke and need to be stopped. The thing is though, whenever adults, parents, grandparents, et cetera, find out about these murders, most of the time they immediately jump to one conclusion; videogames are to blame. Yes it is true that videogames include violence, killing, and destruction of all magnitudes, but these deaths are not all because of the videogame.
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